Shadowwriter1

Thanks for the review!!!

Thanks so much!!! I appreciate the fix ups and will keep all of those great pointsin mind. Thanks again!!

Thanks heaps for reviewing! Aprreciate it.

Thanks for the review, and no I do not need to tell you anything, I am perfectly okay.

Thanks for the review, and yes, there is the implication of suicide. Not very nice I know, but I wasn't exactly happy when I wrote this...

Hey, thanks for the review. To begin with, I think I may answer your questions. 1. The line "We hurt because of selfish gain" is about people hurting others in ...

Thnks for the review!! I really appreciate it :)

I would like to not, that the lack of spacing between the stanzas is because the website is playing up for me. Each stanza is four lines, and all but ...

Well, there is the chance you could completely loose your mind and turn into your brighter, slutty opposite.

Thanks so much for the great review. With the layout, it was the website and as for what is affecting the people, they are in an asylum, but you'll find ...

Did you have to put in my actual name? My nickname would have been just fine. Anyway, I am already continuing with muy horror, I could never leave it behind. ...

Thank you for your review, and to shed some light on your confusion, the poem was not about lover per say, rather about fire. The line "eternal living fire" was ...

Thanks for the great review, as for the repitition, that was a mistake. I have it on a word document and I copied and pasted it, without realising that I ...

This is great. It is fun and I can just hear it being sung infront of like a camfire or to someone whom you care about. It puts me in ...