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Oh wow! I thought the title would be something a little bit different, something more light and elegant. But then I realized it was . The desires of someone tossed ...

wow! I don't normally read poetry, but this caught my eye. This is a very well thought out and beautiful poem. It's a bit hard to read though. Of course ...

I must say this was an excellent read. Several errors as Stella pointed out, but they are considerably smaller than the ones that often show up in work around the ...

An interesting story I must say Munchie! I particularly enjoyed how you fiddled with this idea of how an old beggar man understands the ways of the wise. Your story ...

Hi Adna, Um... I didn't really find anything the others didn't, but I did enjoy reading this. Although I must comment on the fact that this was hard to follow ...

Hi, I'm ST! Here's the critique first: I found this quite interesting, and a new twist to the romance department that's for sure. You had a few mistakes, but this ...

Hey there Newbie, call Thief or ST your evil (but friendly) neighbor. First off, you've got to admit, this was very short and I would like to add that I ...

I thought this pretty good, a little too short, and maybe a little cheesy. You should try adding more character description, I need a good image for this story. I ...

WAY TO SHORT! I must have more, this was so good! Although I did catch some grammar problems... Read it over again and read carefully so you can catch hopefully ...

This was quite touching actually. Sad as well :cry: . All the corrections are above, so there's nothing for me to do here. You might want to read this over ...

So all corrections are above me and that means I don't have to correct anything YAY :!: Like the first person said, I'm confused about the time, as well as ...

Wowee! That's some good writing write there. I only caught one mistake though... She would rather the sound of her screams and the darkness than the silence. Shouldn't it be: ...

Coolio! I thought this was great! One thing though that you might want to correct is: sending adrenalin surging. That's repetition right there. Get rid of the sending or the ...

Waaaaaaah, poor kitty :cry: :cry: :cry: . Sorry, can't stop crying, I'm a sucker for cats... All corrections are above me it seems so I don't need to do anything ...

I thought this was o.k but it needs work. Everything I was going to say is right above me. And I've never read [i]Twilight, so alls good her about copyright ...