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ShadowTony1

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: Pokemon Ultimate Evolution Episode 1: Ryan Zekrom Sparker.

    I really like the way you're thinking in this. Making the protagonist a Pokemon? GENIUS! A very creative idea indeed. The first episode/chapter seems a bit short especially since episodes ...

    Aug 6, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Seven layers of hell.

    I liked the idea of numbering the stories, and it was definitely well detailed. However, I think the transition was a bit off. I think each layer should have an ...

    Aug 3, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: .

    Very interesting short story, except I really wanted this to become a novel xD. The story without beginning, nor end makes it pretty weak and makes the reader do more ...

    Jul 31, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror Re: Race to Oblivion - Prologue

    Hello, as a critic, I must criticize some of your work. First of all, the work is a bit mature, so it's suggested you make note of that(not all of ...

    Jul 31, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Teen Fiction Re: The Bully. Chapter 1.

    ...Wow. Just wow. You have clearly shown a totally creative ploted story that I would never had been so close to think of. As a young writer, I praise your ...

    Jul 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: The Good Life - Prologue: This is Not a Game of Russian Roulette

    I also say that this is an intense prologue, but its just the way I like it ;). What I would say is that you need to improve that thumb ...

    Jul 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Film Re: The Adventures of Mary Gibbs Ch 1

    Strong plot, and well built story. I suggest you add more character backgrounds like a death of a loved one to show why Mary is always afraid and fragile. The ...

    Jul 30, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: h

    I really did enjoy the short story. But for a interesting plot, I really recommend you make this story into a novel. I believe that it would extend the plot ...

    Jul 30, 2014


I say Wolf, for all wolves are not of the same sort; there is one kind with an amenable disposition – neither noisy, nor hateful, nor angry, but tame, obliging and gentle, following the young maids in the streets, even into their homes. Alas! Who does not know that these gentle wolves are of all such creatures the most dangerous!
— Charles Perrault