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Re: Prologue- I'm there for you
I loved this story! I can't wait until u get the 1st chapter up...I liked how you began the story. It was way better than anything i've ever began my ...
Oct 9, 2009 -
Re: Pain gained, Love lost
I loved your poem! It was the most amazing poem that i've read in a long time, It was vaguely depressing but i liked it all the same, Keep writing!
Sep 10, 2009 -
Re: Black Hearts Blue Tears
hi everybody! I'm just writing to tell you that i'm re-writing this story...again. I'm revising the Prologue and 1st chapter and i will post soon. thanks to all of my ...
Jun 3, 2009 -
Re: Last Day of My Love
lol. thx.
May 19, 2009 -
Re: Last Day of My Love
thx. I wrote this poem in ten minutes when i was practically ruunning out of my room, so it isnt that good. lol. but thx for reviewing and i will ...
May 15, 2009 -
Re: Black Hearts Blue Tears
thx to everyone who reviewed this chapter. I'm typing the first chapter on Microsoft word right now, and as soon as I'm done I will put it on here. the ...
May 13, 2009 -
Re: White prison
i loved your poem. It was great. This happens to me a lot when I'm writing. I'll sit there for hours and not think of anything to say. It sucks. ...
May 13, 2009 -
Re: Black Hearts Blue Tears
I'm going to finish the second chapter and post it soon. I think u'll like the rest of it. But thanx 4 reviewing. I appreciate it.
May 10, 2009 -
Re: Black Hearts Blue Tears
The sister wasn't the murderer but you were close SuzieCake. She was the murdered. Clayton is Jessica's (the main character) boyfriend. U'll mmet him in the 1st chapter which is ...
May 7, 2009 -
Re: Black Hearts Blue Tears
thx. i'm still writing the next chapter, but it's almost finished.
May 5, 2009 -
Re: Last Day of My Love
thx for reviewing. I dont really like this poem because it doesnt portray the emotion i was looking for.
May 4, 2009 -
Re: Twilight Fan Fiction
I liked it. When i read this, I could actually feel Bella's hurt and Edwards was an amzing read. From the opening line I was into it. You've written an ...
Apr 14, 2009 -
Re: A Sad Poem.
I thought that this poem was beautiful. Sad, but beautiful. k
Apr 9, 2009 -
Re: Black Hearts, Blue Bloods
thank both of you for reviewing. I think I might re-write this story from front to back because i realize some of my mistakes and I have some new ideas ...
Apr 2, 2009 -
Re: -Inconcessus- One
hey, I loved your story. It was great! i especially loved Sophia, she sounds really interesting. !Well, that's all I've got for now. bye. Shadow Princess
Apr 2, 2009
