ShadowHunter

Hello there! I've heard you read this, so I think it helped me to read this, knowing where you were coming from. The work was really thought out and you ...

This is a really interesting premiss you've got here and I would live to see it developed more. The characters seem interesting and this world you've created feels like its ...

Yay! a main character that is not good, but evil! I like reading stories like these because they tell it from other point of view and offer us up reasons ...

This is a really cool piece and it was short and to the point. You gave your opinion about how you know when your country is falling, because they no ...

Hello again! I would just like to say again how much I like your story! You have a fantastic idea an I love reading your story's. That being said, I ...

You have a fantastic story starting up here and I will definitely read more. As far as I can tell there are only a few story errors. The first one ...

This story is developing quite well, and I like the what I have seen of it so far. However, the major plot point in this chapter was easily seen in ...

I love how you introduced your characters! They both sound like fantastic, well structured people and I want to learn even more about them and their lives. Th imagery in ...

I like the idea you have going on here and it was interesting to read, but you where right, the bending thing very closely resembled Avatar. I think it would ...

I adore the Harry Potter series, so the fact that you wrote this so well makes me do a little happy dance in my chair. I only hope that you ...

The story has potental, I'll give you that. The only problem I have with it is the fact that we don't get introduced to any of the characters. This intro ...

I love the dark side of things, so the fact that you chose to end the story like that was perfect! You can feel the panic of the person in ...

Wow, this was super dark. It almost felt like it should have been a free verse poem because of the way you set up the lines. The idea for the ...

I really like the Greek myths, so the fact that you chose to do an non-Percy Jackson story really made me happy. I found it interesting that you started out ...

I love this story! I love the fact that you dealt with the darker side of childhood fears, you actually made it seem as if there was a possibility that ...