ShadeGloe

Wow. This poem is amazing. It has so much to give. The form is unique and involved, drawing in the reader visually. There is an underlying message in the words ...

That's very interesting. For a prologue, there are lots of places of the story to grow and details to expand on. The reading hints at many mix ups and mistakes ...

Well, I just read all of your story, took about thirty minutes. So this will sort of the a review on the overall story and this chapter. Your story moves ...

Initial reaction: What!!!! NO!!! And a little bit of Carsten deserved it, and I can't believe Sam doesn't realize that Carsten wiped his memory. Second thought: Are Ashley and Sam ...

Wow. This is harsh. And true. The reality of war. I love this poem. I like the simplicity and the topic. The question and answer really let's you into the ...

I really like this poem. In short its fantastic. But there are a couple of errors. In the line of the German girl she said "I just eat food without ...

Hey, Shade here, First off I love this idea, do you mind if I "steal" it/ share some of my own quotes in a similar fashion? If not thats okay. ...

This is my first review, so please tell me if I'm too harsh or too easy. First, I like the idea of the story and how the characters are portrayed. ...