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Sh1zune

Sh1zune

  • Poetry » Realistic, Politics Re: stop saying boys will be boys

    Mar 21, 2025
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: where is my edward rochester ?

    I really loved this poem! You added in so much emotion into each line and reading line after line made the hairs of my neck stand. The first part sort ...

    Mar 21, 2025
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: dear past and future

    I accidentally mixed three different poems into this poem. I am so sorry! I bolded one of the poems and italicized the other poem to make them easier to differentiate.

    Mar 21, 2025
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: dear past and future

    Thank you so much!

    Mar 21, 2025
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: dear past and future

    Thank you!

    Mar 21, 2025
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: dear past and future

    Thank you so much for the feedback! I just realized that I accidentally mixed in one of my other poems into this poem because all of my poems are from ...

    Mar 21, 2025
  • Other » General, General Re: Candy

    This is very good!! Keep up the good work!

    Mar 13, 2025
  • Poetry » Romantic, Horror Re: consume me

    I love this poem, but it also concerns me. It's certainly a beautiful work of art, but- WOW. This is some pretty heavy stuff. Are you okay?

    Mar 13, 2025


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