SerenityCross

A word about you're spoiler.. This song is not okay it's FANTASTIC!! I can toatally see this in the top 10 charts! This song can make people cry and sing ...

Hi! I just want to start off saying; you never EVER start off with your cast in the beginning of a play, the others around here will eat you alive ...

*Shudders* God, way to get my mind into creepy mode! *Shudders again* Thanks for that. Apart from the...*Shudders yet again* It is very well written. You should write horror books. ...

Well done!! I can totally believe that you are one with the ocean. I could not find any mistakes, so I assume that means that there are none! You should ...

Hi!! Oh god I cried when I read this, and I havent cried since I broke my arm in Kindy!!!! I applaude no,no I WORSHIP you for making me cry. ...

This is very well written. Like others have said, a bit graphic, but don't let that stop you. I LOVE dragons, and if you dont see the story as a ...

Hey. This is a very good story. I like the fact that it's told from a girl's perspective. You don't really see girls fighting hand-to-hand... Anyway, this is a really ...

A very well written poem. I am basically in the room with the poor king. Just one small bone to pick; The King seats I think that this should be ...

Hey, I agree with what the others said, this would be an fantastic novel. Just a few questions though... Why was Bloom's future sealed by a kiss? Why does she ...

Wow. I felt actually and truly scared after reading this. I was alone in my bedroom. Anyway, I could not find any mistakes at all, so very well done! I ...

I really enjoyed this chapter, it has the potential to be one of those stories that draws you in and draws you in until you get so caught up in ...

Wow that was very good. I'm not much of a help, but I thought is was good nonetheless. What is a 'nightling'? Just want to know. It was very good!!!! ...

That was a very good story. A little sad...but good none the less. I cloudn't find a single grammar error or anything. I loved it. :) :)

Wow. A very good start. I have a few problems though... I feel like I've missed something between the first and second paragraphs and that threw me off. I don't ...

Oh wow! I love the fact that the story starts with a life and a death at the same time! I just have one small question: How does the nurse ...