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Re: E.
Reading this hurts. Stabs right into my heart. I feel for you. I know it sounds cliched and cheesy, but I do. It's beautiful and it's painful and it's real ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Black Hearts
Ah it seems I am fated to discover only works that affect me personally today. Because really, who hasn't met that one person who everyone loves no matter how many ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: Textbooks and Fairytales
This is, well, it's brilliant. It's well written structurally so it flows, but most importantly it's honest. It starts off beautifully with that first line "There's something very wrong in ...
Mar 30, 2014 -
Re: An Essay on Society (from the perspective of a cat)
What can I say? This is an amazing essay. Your arguments are well thought out and presented. You gave us a lot of information on the topic, but didn't waste ...
Jan 24, 2014 -
Re: I am a selfish
This is a strongly written essay with an interesting opinion on the topic. I paticularly enjoyed this "If you feel happy by dancing do it, if you feel happy by ...
Jan 24, 2014 -
Re: How to be a Spy
This was really adorable how you had a toddler as your main character. I love how he based his spying off a tv series, it really sounds like something a ...
Jan 9, 2014 -
Re: The True Fairytale
This is amazing!! I really like how you did a horror version of the fairy tale that practically everyone has heard. It was really well written how everything she did ...
Jan 9, 2014 -
Re: Soul's Decay : Chapter Two
I really enjoy this. It's a really interesting idea for a story and the multiple points of view are interesting. I like how you connected Annabell and Adeline through Jayden. ...
Jan 9, 2014 -
Re: Troublemaker
This is a really good story. It reads well and your narrator is interesting. It's something I would like to read more of which is my one complaint: It should ...
Jan 9, 2014 -
Re: Cole's Legacy --- Chapter 2
I think you did a good job of blending science and fantasy. Cole was an interesting character for the story to follow. However Alfred is definitely my favourite character. Aurora ...
Jan 7, 2014 -
Re: Embrace of the Undead
Great work. Your main character was interesting as a narrator and I enjoyed listening to her. I don't normally read romance, but yours is one that I enjoyed. I seriously ...
Jan 7, 2014
