Seraph

Wow. That is a beautiful poem and it's filled to the brim with emotions! I can see this take place as I read it! Oh, how I sympathize and empathize! ...

Wow. This is truly an amazing poem! I see that the main theme is revenge! It is displayed so well here it's almsot as if I feel the need exhalt ...

This is a great piece! Normally, I too would shun the use of profanity, especially whilst in a poem. However, you truly conduct these words in such a way that, ...

Wow. I've seen some jokes/scenarios before, but this is just brilliant! Love is indeed a tough business. Although maybe giving a little extra to it may tip it over the ...

The poem is quite touching and, if I may, fruitful with emotion. However, I noticed that capitalization wasn't really used. I understand that you didn't want to use punctuation, but ...

Wow! This is a great poem! If you are into writing novels or stories, then I highly suggest that you write one based off of this poem! If you incorporate ...

Wow. I am truly impressed by your work. When you said that you were a writer, you weren't kidding! Just like Wolfgirl, I too wonder about your thoughts while writing ...

Jealousy has consumed thee! You have made a clear portrayal of this and obviously wish to become even someone else to gain their possessions/skills/accomplishments! Even though you have used vulgar ...

You have displayed emotion in a realistic point of view. As if it was a monologue, or even a dialog. Although sometimes, you must remember that it isn't just what ...

You clearly have an incredible desire to be with this person. Obviously somone whom you care deeply about and may even love. Although the question is... Whom may this be? ...