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Re: Too late to save
Wow. I truly felt the emotion you put into this. Through only a few words, you've shown so many feelings and conveyed stories that many can relate to, as well ...
Jul 26, 2013 -
Re: Simple Rain Haiku's
Hello there! Upon scrolling through YWS, I happened to come across your haikus and simply adore them! Nonetheless, there are various aspects that may be improved, as mentioned by some ...
Jun 30, 2013 -
Re: Gasoline
Wow. Bravo, my friend! ^-^ I'll start off my telling you what I liked about the poem... 1. You have creative metaphors and analogies. The comparison of the speaker's love ...
May 25, 2013 -
Re: Life After I Died (Part 1)
Wow. Even though it was short, it was a powerful and gripping intro. Very interesting indeed. However... I did find one error in here... by my won son. I think ...
Dec 20, 2011 -
Re: With All the Angelfish
Blaze... All I can say is that I haven't cried in a while... Yet... Tears threaten me now... Wow. This is... All I can say is that I am amazed ...
Dec 19, 2011 -
Re: Death of the Night
Wow Mikko! This is a piece of art! I wish that I could say more but, that basically sums it up right there! :D I love the imagery you give ...
Nov 20, 2011 -
Re: Story 6 (Part 3)
Wow Judy! I love the way you write! You've included backstories for your characters, comedic relief, and great personalities for all of your characters. On top of that, the story ...
Nov 18, 2011 -
Re: The first bullet...
Wow. I love your style and the message that you send here! It's a great way of showing your opinion about violence and war! Just like the other reviewers, I ...
Nov 12, 2011 -
Re: Purple tongue.
Wow! I loved your word use! You obviously have quite the vocabulary! You are a very talented writer. Even though I am not the best reviewer on Young Writers Society, ...
Nov 10, 2011 -
Re: Bahrain
Wow. You are quite loyal to your country. I praise you for being so! We can clearly tell by the soothing and welcoming message that you have portrayed here! The ...
Nov 3, 2011 -
Re: A Drop of Crimson
Wow. This work of art just has me baffled! I enjoyed this miraculous piece from the beginning to the end! Your descrpitions are as perfect as they can get when ...
Nov 3, 2011 -
Re: Wake Me Up
Wow. That is truly a work of art! I could connect to it so much. Dreams and reality, one seems like it should be in the place of another. I ...
Nov 3, 2011 -
Re: Defender Of Love.
This is a very well written poem! Thank you for sharing it with us! However, I have found a few minor errors and/or questionable parts. Throughout this poem, I've noticed ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Love is Lost ...
Wow! I enjoyed this poem very much! You, however, went off of the rhyming scheme at the end though. If you did it on purpose, it's okay, I do that ...
Oct 29, 2011 -
Re: Hear No Silence
Wow! A mix of old and new! Birth and decay! Hope and melancholia! I think that you have written this in a beautiful manner! I can totally see everything in ...
Oct 28, 2011
