SeleneForeverDream

Okay, it seems everyone has given his/her opinion on the matter, and don't get me wrong it's very intriguing. Let's just go through mechanics first, though. ;) Then on to ...

Hiya CoF! :D Let's see what you have here. Nit-Picks: Standing there, with your innocent stare. Even though this comma goes well with the rest of your stanza, it's unnecessary. ...

Hey there, Ducky! I'm Selene, and it's lovely to meet you. ^_^ This was such a cute little story! I liked that this had a beginning, middle, and end to ...

This feels like lyric poetry to me... I'll review it when your piece is moved to the Poetry section. No biggy. ^_^ Until then, welcome, welcome, welcome to the wonderful ...

I liked this poem from the first two lines. Your ties between a personal self, or a human who feels emotion, and the scarecrow was very well done. I read ...

Hey there, Hugs! *hugs* Welcome to YWS! :D I'm Selene, and it's lovely to meet you. ^_^ Have you checked out this huge site yet? YWS may seem intimidating at ...

Hey there, Greyson! Welcome to the wonderful world of YWS! I'm Selene *shakes hand* and it's nice to meet you. ^_^ So what are your hobbies besides writing? Do you ...

Wow, that was truly touching. First off, I'm sorry about your mom. It's tough living with an alcoholic in the house because they become consumed by drinking. It's a horrible ...

Hey there Jeanette! I'm Selene, and it's lovely to meet you! ^_^ Punctuation Commas, commas everywhere! I see where you're coming from, honestly I do. Here's the secret though: you ...

Hiya winie! Let's get down to business... ~ Ideas ~ Interesting idea with the pendant, because it gives way to more of a story that's waiting to be told. It ...

Oh... wow! That is a pretty long chapter. o.o Luckily, that's how I like 'em. ^_^ But I also saw that you posted more than one chapter. You see, that's ...

Heya Kamas! Long time, no talk! :D How have you been? I like your new color, because you wear it so well! :D ... I would go about trying to ...

Hiya Cassie! I don't believe we've met; I'm Selene and it's nice to meet you. :D So let's get onto critiquing, shall we? Nit-Picks: I held Joel's photograph in my ...

Heya, I'm Selene! I'll be your reviewer for today. :) Stanza-by-Stanza - Its strange how many things Remind me of you. Especially inside the Memory Haven. Change 'its' to 'it's'. ...

Heya Creative! I'm Selene and I shall be your happy reviewer for today. :) Nit-Picks- Today. A two day. Horrible, horrible two day without him sitting across from me, staring. ...