SeleneForeverDream

Hiya, gleek! :D Welcome to Young Writers Society! How are you liking the site here? Have you looked around the Community Forums yet? If you go there you can post ...

Hey cupcake! This poem just screamed cuteness to me! :D However, I think the rhyming took away from the poem and made some of the lines awkward. Other than that, ...

Hiya RubyTuesday! Welcome to the wonderful world of YWS! I hope you're finding everything okay here. ^_^ I liked your description a lot, and I saw a lot of talent ...

Hi, Helen! I really like this style of writing you have going here- it's unique! The small details you were mindful to insert were quite effective in setting the stage ...

Hey there, Persephoneia! :D This poem was magical, and it does make sense that this was a nightmare. Yet I feel it had some beautiful air of mystery to it ...

Hi Blue! I enjoyed this poem; it was short and sweet. What I would really watch is the originality of what it is you're writing. I felt that you could ...

Okay, so I'm just going to say first off that I read this poem when you first posted it. I hadn't had time to review it but I thought about ...

Hey, Styley, and welcome to Young Writer's Society! :D First off, I must say I enjoyed this poem. I liked how you alluded to the death of the speaker in ...

Ooo, this is interesting! Your point of view is very interesting and your story here was enough to keep me reading. Here are just a few nit-picks- The whole ordeal ...

Hey there, grigoris! :D Welcome to Young Writers Society! Have you been to the Welcome Mat yet? It's in Community forums. If you go a bunch of friendly people will ...

Hiya, dege! Welcome to Young Writers Society! *shakes hand* I'm Selene, and if you need anything feel free to ask. So have you taken a look around YWS? Since you're ...

Hey there, Hobbit! This looks pretty interesting, so let's see what we've got. The only thing that really stood out to me was the jumping of ideas between your first ...

Hey there, photo! I love the idea you had behind this poem. Your first stanza is very eye-catching in the sense that it's distinctive from other poems. It had an ...

Hiya KitRose! I'm Selene, and I shall be your reviewer for today. ^_^ So you really didn't give me much to work with here. :/ Well, I'll give it a ...

Hey there, Aspiring! :D I'm here to get reviewin'! Nit-Picks: He peeled his eyes away from her face and studied the old worn bookmark on the girls pant leg. Apostrophe ...