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Re: Wulfirc {Introduction Chapter}
This is good. Very good. But the main idea of these two paragraphs seem like they didn't come from the beginning of a book (leaving out Wulfric's introduction at the ...
Apr 27, 2010 -
Re: First draft of the first chapter of my novel
My computer is acting up. A lot of words in the story have been cut out for some reason. I will have this fully posted and ready later today. Sorry.
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: Medieval England, During The Hundred Years War
Thanks to both of you. Both are outstanding pieces of advice. Thanks again! :D
Apr 20, 2010 -
Re: World War 3
Thanks a lot guys. That's some good advice. :D
Apr 14, 2010 -
Re: 2 paragraphs of my novel. Worded properly?
Thanks for the help. I will also be posting several paragraphs from a war novel that I stopped writing several weeks ago.
Apr 13, 2010 -
Re: In Retrospect: Evil Knows No Limit
This was a very good piece. It had me interested from the beginning. Great job! :) 8 out of 10.
Apr 12, 2010 -
Re: Last Blaze of Summer (Flash Fiction)
I'm not a professional editor... but besides several grammatical errors, this piece was outstanding!! :D Thanks for submitting it! -Seibhris
Apr 11, 2010