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Hi! First of all, welcome to the site :D This was a really nice and simple story, I liked it very much, and it's really good as a first attempt ...

Hi! The concept and idea are very, very nice. The pictures in the first place, whcih show all of the memories and the like, then the second, more hidden, aspect ...

Hi there! Happy review day! Before starting I have to say I haven't read the other chapters, but you seemed to have been expecting that. I hope you don't mind ...

Hi! Happy review day! The beginning was well done, it gives us a lot of information. The story unwinds effortlessly, everything builds itself at the right pace, one brick over ...

Hi! Though this piece was short it gave a good general idea of the universe the story takes place in. The MC seems arrogant, full of himself, yet with a ...

Hi! I see that a lot of stuff has been said by the others, but I'd like to chime in as well ;) The beginning of this story is full ...

Hi! Segreto here to review! Firstly, I was hooked instantly by the tittle, and the first few lines are excellent, yet I think that it becomes more and more confusing ...

Hello! This is a really interesting story and I liked it very much. The descriptions were colorful and detailed, the emotions of the character were well explained, and it seems ...

Hi! First of all I'd like to say I was entranced by this from the first few words and the concept of names never fully or truly describing anything is ...

Hi there, again! The second part of this story is as wonderful as the first, the tension has lifted, but the perfect mingle of emotions still holds, the words flow ...

Hi there! Ok, I'll start saying that this story is amazing. From the first few lines the tense and dark atmosphere is established wonderfully and is held together through out ...

Oh, Hi there! This story was fun, interesting and exiting to read, the prologue is just perfect, it gets you hooked up immediately. The language is simple and down to ...

Hi, here I am to review! Before I start I would like to say that I know little to nothing about the Odyssey, everything that I do know are only ...

Hi there! I'd like to start by saying that this is a fantastc poem, the colors and the images you manage to depict so clearly are wonderful. And, in the ...

Hi! This peace is wonderful, the words flow so perfectly and the Protagonist's emotions and toughs are so easy to understand, it is very easy to sympathize with him. The ...