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Re: My first poem - words cannot describe
This is great, man!
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Re: True Romance
Thank you!
Aug 31 -
Re: True Romance
Thanks, I think it works so well because of how personal it was lol
Aug 31 -
Re: Trippin’
Thank you, Im glad you liked it, and thanks for the feedback!
Aug 31 -
Re: Trippin’
Thank you, I did feel like structurally I wrote it a little weakly but I appreciate your praise
Aug 31 -
Re: True Romance
Thanks, it’s a very visceral feeling I wanted to capture.
Aug 30 -
Re: my mind
Loved this! It really captures the feeling of vulnerability caused from one’s mind alone. The crushing thoughts, the self doubt, I love those being represent as monsters. It’s very creative ...
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Re: Scary Home
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Aug 30
The best type of art is the art that draws from personal experiences, and I really feel this came from a place that was still raw from sadness. My heart ... -
Re: True Romance
Thank you thank you 🙏
Aug 29 -
Re: True Romance
Taking notes, thank you for your feedback. I look forward to writing more! You are very much correct, I got as personal and vulnerable as I could. I think it ...
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Re: A Day in College
This was a really fun read. It really paints a picture of what college is like as a positive social environment and also, just a really good use of vocabulary.
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Re: True Romance
Thank you, that means a lot
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