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Sebastian

  • Poetry » Romantic, Spiritual Re: My first poem - words cannot describe

    This is great, man!

    Sep 1
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: True Romance

    Thank you!

    Aug 31
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: True Romance

    Thanks, I think it works so well because of how personal it was lol

    Aug 31
  • Short Story » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Trippin’

    Thank you, Im glad you liked it, and thanks for the feedback!

    Aug 31
  • Short Story » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Trippin’

    Thank you, I did feel like structurally I wrote it a little weakly but I appreciate your praise

    Aug 31
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: True Romance

    Thanks, it’s a very visceral feeling I wanted to capture.

    Aug 30
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: my mind

    Loved this! It really captures the feeling of vulnerability caused from one’s mind alone. The crushing thoughts, the self doubt, I love those being represent as monsters. It’s very creative ...

    Aug 30
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Scary Home

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    The best type of art is the art that draws from personal experiences, and I really feel this came from a place that was still raw from sadness. My heart ...

    Aug 30
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: True Romance

    Thank you thank you 🙏

    Aug 29
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: True Romance

    Taking notes, thank you for your feedback. I look forward to writing more! You are very much correct, I got as personal and vulnerable as I could. I think it ...

    Aug 29
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: A Day in College

    This was a really fun read. It really paints a picture of what college is like as a positive social environment and also, just a really good use of vocabulary.

    Aug 29
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: True Romance

    Thank you, that means a lot

    Aug 29


Blessed is the man who, having nothing to say, abstains from giving us wordy evidence of the fact.
— George Eliot