ScriboErgoSum

Hi there! First of all: brilliant concept. I have to say that right away. I love, love, love what you're going for here. I do think that you could execute ...

Hiya, Pretty much what Teo said. Great idea, but this is a little too short and undeveloped to be a poem. It really needs some details to give it substance. ...

Hello, kookie1993. Just so you know, you're supposed to review at least two pieces for every poem or story you submit. Since you're new, it's no big deal that you ...

Hi Brushfire! Just to let you know, the rule is to do two reviews for every poem or story you post. Since you're new, it's fine that you didn't know ...

Hi, unicyclegurl! :D One quick thing before I talk about your poem: the site rules are that you should critique at least two poems before you post one of your ...

Hey there Zalarus. :) I think this is a good poem, and I like it a lot. You've used some nice turns of phrase. I've gone through it line-by-line below. ...

Hi Erica! Nice to meet you. I like this poem's theme of how the choices we make affect our lives. However, in some places it seems awkward. I've done a ...

Hi gaylegoh! I'm ScriboErgoSum and I'll be critiquing your poem this morning. First off, I think this is a fantastic poem. You've taken a subject most people would never even ...

Hi, backgroundbob. :) This is a good poem you've written here. I like the non-rhyming structure and there are some gorgeous phrases you've used. The Easter morning ghost is Christ, ...

Hello there! :D I must say, your rhythm is perfect in this sonnet. It flows really nicely. That's hard to do - good job. You've also used the language really ...

Hello. :) First of all, appreciated is spelled with two p's. ;) Okay. This poem leaves me puzzled. I want to like it. It's very distinctive. But I'm just not ...

Hi there Picklebuddy7. :) I've done a line-by-line critique of your poem below. The stains on the carpet bleed color even though they're washed clean. These first lines don't make ...

Hi there! :D This is a really nice poem. I've done a line-by-line critique of it below. Oh to be a bird! To soar and dive over mountains and oceans. ...

Hello erratik_statik. :) I like this poem of yours but I think you can make it better with a few adjustments. My heart is in a vice whenever I shyly ...

Hi there! :) I really like this poem. The title caught my attention right away, and I like the non-rhyming style you've written the poem itself in. It's powerful, not ...