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Scartuina

  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: meaning:null

    I like this, I like this a lot. It brings into question the nature of meaning, is meaning assigned by the viewer or by the creator? or does meaning manifest ...

    Mar 4, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Two Rocks Fell Side by Side

    I won't be reviewing grammar, that's all easily corrected. I'll try to review and give feedback on the concepts your poem puts forth and the structure as those are what ...

    Mar 3, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Morphers Chapter 1

    OK, this is a very weird chapter, and I don't mean in terms of the plot which is fairly cliche. Now, I'll simply start by saying that I have no ...

    Oct 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: spare me

    I like the subject of the poem, about the struggle of writing. However I wouldn't have known it was about writing emotions unless I read the description so I think ...

    Sep 20, 2016
  • Other » Realistic, Dramatic Re: brutally honest (thoughts, feelings, healing)

    I like the message the poem conveys, and despite it being so profoundly personal I still find it quite easy to relate. I suppose because it discusses universal themes like ...

    Sep 19, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Across

    hey this a review. I'll start off with what is literally wrong with the poem. I feel as if rhyme is forced in some places and just forgotten in others ...

    Sep 4, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Putting Down the Blade

    Simple poem like this deserves a simple review. It works, the meaning is clear and well conveyed. I would say it is more of read than an experience though. I ...

    Sep 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Pyromaniac in Silent Streets

    It's been too long since I've seen narrative poetry like this! I really like narrative poetry so tell me if you ever post any more (I'm new to the site ...

    Sep 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Writhing

    My first review so don't expect a very good one. You use a lot of repetition, which as a technique has it's purposes namely to emphasise a sound or idea. ...

    Sep 1, 2016


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