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ScarletDreams14

  • Poetry » General, General Re: A letter of complaint to the gossipy girls in gym class

    I actually found this funny, it reminds me of someone I know. You did a great job on this and should be proud of yourself. It's obvious this was based ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative Re: Blind - Chapter 1

    Hello there! Scarlet here to review! I did enjoy this, though it was disappointingly short. It's not worth adding more since you have 19 chapters. I don't notice any grammar ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Chateau Rouge

    Hello! Scarlet here to review! I was actually quite pleased with the outcome of this. I loved the excitement and suspense in this. It had me on the edge of ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Satire, Mystery / Suspense Re: Fluster: Part One

    Hello there! Scarlet here to review! I actually really liked this story, it was strange and unique. Not to mention funny. The mystery and suspense category is perfect for it. ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: Labels

    Hey there! Scarlet here to review! I was sort of disappointed it was so short but it got the message out otherwise. I do believe it sends out a good ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Corps of Recovery: Part 1

    Hello! Scarlet here to review! I found it interesting. I was a little confused at what was going on at first and I didn't realize he was royalty until later ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: -

    Hello! Scarlet here to review! I'm not too sure what to feel about this about this. It's not really disturbing but I somewhat find it insulting. Your character to be ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: We are all equal. For we live under the same sky.

    Hello! Scarlet here to review! I smiled reading this, I believe in equal rights strongly amongst the people. I agree, it shouldn't matter what skin color you are, race, gender, ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Dali ekphrasis poem

    Hello! Scarlet here for review! I really love the painting, I've never heard of the artist but now I love him! Disappointingly, the poem was short and I wish I ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Dramatic Re: The Demon of Sludge

    Hi there! Scarlet here to review! I wasn't really laughing at first but when it got too the 3rd paragraph I found it really funny. The third sentenced grossed me ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Narrative Re: I Did A Thing

    Hi there! Scarlet here to review! I have a few nitpicks I'd like to discuss. NITPICKING TIME!!!!! I don't quite understand why it's in humor? I don't mean to be ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Humor Re: A Backwards World Ch.1 Misery is happiness.

    Hello! Scarlet here to review! This was really funny, I'm laughing now as I type this. It had a certain ironic humor that I can't find anywhere else. If you ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Blood Bath: Directed By Michael Bay

    Hi there! Scarlet here too review. This was actually decently funny, I laughed at a few parts. Not disappointing, it was well worth the read and I'm glad I decided ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: Gum Paste

    No offense, but I found this pointless and sort of boring. I'm only 14 but I have the maturity of a 30 year old. Now don't be offended it's just ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: The Four Wicked Witches

    Hello! Scarlet here to review! Now don't take this too offense but I didn't find this funny at all. Maybe your just misunderstanding your teacher, yes she sounds evil but ...

    Jun 29, 2014


The illiterate of the 21st century will not be those who cannot read and write, but those who cannot learn, unlearn, and relearn.
— Alvin Toffler