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  • Poetry » General, General Re: A letter of complaint to the gossipy girls in gym class

    I actually found this funny, it reminds me of someone I know. You did a great job on this and should be proud of yourself. It's obvious this was based ...

    Jun 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative Re: Blind - Chapter 1

    Hello there! Scarlet here to review! I did enjoy this, though it was disappointingly short. It's not worth adding more since you have 19 chapters. I don't notice any grammar ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Chateau Rouge

    Hello! Scarlet here to review! I was actually quite pleased with the outcome of this. I loved the excitement and suspense in this. It had me on the edge of ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Satire, Mystery / Suspense Re: Fluster: Part One

    Hello there! Scarlet here to review! I actually really liked this story, it was strange and unique. Not to mention funny. The mystery and suspense category is perfect for it. ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, General Re: Labels

    Hey there! Scarlet here to review! I was sort of disappointed it was so short but it got the message out otherwise. I do believe it sends out a good ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Corps of Recovery: Part 1

    Hello! Scarlet here to review! I found it interesting. I was a little confused at what was going on at first and I didn't realize he was royalty until later ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: -

    Hello! Scarlet here to review! I'm not too sure what to feel about this about this. It's not really disturbing but I somewhat find it insulting. Your character to be ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: We are all equal. For we live under the same sky.

    Hello! Scarlet here to review! I smiled reading this, I believe in equal rights strongly amongst the people. I agree, it shouldn't matter what skin color you are, race, gender, ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Dali ekphrasis poem

    Hello! Scarlet here for review! I really love the painting, I've never heard of the artist but now I love him! Disappointingly, the poem was short and I wish I ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Dramatic Re: The Demon of Sludge

    Hi there! Scarlet here to review! I wasn't really laughing at first but when it got too the 3rd paragraph I found it really funny. The third sentenced grossed me ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Narrative Re: I Did A Thing

    Hi there! Scarlet here to review! I have a few nitpicks I'd like to discuss. NITPICKING TIME!!!!! I don't quite understand why it's in humor? I don't mean to be ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Humor Re: A Backwards World Ch.1 Misery is happiness.

    Hello! Scarlet here to review! This was really funny, I'm laughing now as I type this. It had a certain ironic humor that I can't find anywhere else. If you ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: Blood Bath: Directed By Michael Bay

    Hi there! Scarlet here too review. This was actually decently funny, I laughed at a few parts. Not disappointing, it was well worth the read and I'm glad I decided ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: Gum Paste

    No offense, but I found this pointless and sort of boring. I'm only 14 but I have the maturity of a 30 year old. Now don't be offended it's just ...

    Jun 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: The Four Wicked Witches

    Hello! Scarlet here to review! Now don't take this too offense but I didn't find this funny at all. Maybe your just misunderstanding your teacher, yes she sounds evil but ...

    Jun 29, 2014


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