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  • Other » General, General Re: diagonal toppings

    Hey there! Scarlet here, as you know It's review day. You know what that means, time to review! Nitpicks first... - First off, I don't like how everythings mushed into ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Love Chapter 3 {Edited}

    Hey there! Scarlet here, as you know It's review day. You know what that means, time to review! Nitpicks first... Despite the chills I got in my body I managed ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Romantic Re: Love Chapter 1 {Edited}

    Hey there! Scarlet here, as you know It's review day. You know what that means, time to review! Nitpicks first... I honestly admire this quality of her's . - Okay ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic Re: The Price of Freedom

    Hey there! Scarlet here, as you know It's review day. You know what that means, time to review! Nitpicks first... - Now I see this a lot, you lack In ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Generations of Inspiration

    Hey there! Scarlet here, as you know It's review day. You know what that means, time to review! Nitpicks first... - The only possible nitpick I have is the first ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Script » Realistic, General Re: Life and Death

    Hey there! Scarlet here, as you know It's review day. You know what that means, time to review! Nitpicks first... - After you finish a sentence, you only need one ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Won't Because I Can't

    Hey there! Scarlet here, as you know It's review day. You know what that means, time to review! Nitpicks first... - Oops, I don't have any! Congrats! Look, I understand ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Culture Re: No Kulfi Today

    Hey there! Scarlet here, as you know It's review day. Which means...time to review! Nitpicks first. - Now what bothered me the most about this Is the lack of punctuation. ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Other » Realistic, Narrative Re: Ultramarine Idiot

    Hey there! Scarlet here, as you know It's review day. Which means...time to review! Nitpicking first, sorry! - Now what bothered me the absolute most was the formatting and the ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: DELETED

    Hey there! Scarlet here, as you know It's review day. Which means...time to review! Nitpicks first. You would be hard pressed to find anything taller than two stories, but you ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: DELETED

    Hey there! Scarlet here, as you know It's review day. Which means...time to review! They had come to Quil on a whim during their pilgrimage through the Scij mountains. They ...

    Jul 27, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Lyrical Re: I Am Weird - My Parody Of 'Let It Go'

    Hey there! Scarlet here, as you know It's review day. Which means...time to review! Randomness glows in my eyes tonight , N othing normal to be seen. - Nothing shouldn't ...

    Jul 26, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Health, Science Re: Bad Posture Could End Up Killing You in the End!

    Hey there! Scarlet here, as you know It's review day. Which means...time to review! Now first off I'll start with the nitpicks and such. According to http://www.masschiro.org, “More than 80% ...

    Jul 26, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: All That He Says That I Am.

    Hey there, Scarlet here to review! I do have one possible nitpick. He says I am his child He says I am his child - I'm not sure If you ...

    Jul 24, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Another World

    Hey there! Scarlet here to review. Before I get to the good stuff, I have a few nitpicks. - I don't like how it's all blocked up, It makes it ...

    Jul 24, 2014


I was promis'd on a time, To have a reason for my rhyme: From that time unto this season, I receiv'd nor rhyme nor reason.
— Edmund Spenser