Scarlet15

I LOVE this!! :D Feel free to check out my pieces but they aren't that good. :/

All I can say is that this story is absolutely amazing! :D

I would like it if you kinda made it into a story but overall I thought it was pretty good. :) I like your work.

That was actually pretty deep and intense. :3 I say keep on writing! :D

Really interesting but I thought it was too short. :/

Thanks! I will really try to jump into the plot more once I write the second chapter. :)

I thought was really powerful and emotional. :} I think you should definitely should write more. :)

I thought it was pretty good. :)

I thought this was pretty good. It always made me want to know what was happening next. :3

ok!! :D

Thanks for the critiquing guys!! xD I fixed it up A LOT and I would appreciate it if you tell me what you think of the new version. :}

I read some of this and I have to say this is absolutely AMAZING!!! :D

Thanks. Obviously I make a lot of mistakes in my writing and I'm sorry for that. But yea. She just made that her user. Because.. hers and Rainees would be ...

Thanks for critiquing it again. :/ I feel bad that I made all of those mistakes.. -.-

Thanks for critiquing it. The thing is.. it's kinda obvious. An ocean is full of all those exotic creatures and people where scared of her because she dressed gothically. You ...