Satira

haha, well, thanks for sticking with it, it means a lot to me! Although you kind of contradict yourself in this review, what with liking the story one sentence, and ...

Hello! So sorry you've had to wait this long for a second review! hm... You know, poetry doesn't have to rhyme, but what it does need is rhythm. And this ...

wow, thank you! I'm honestly amazed at how positive these reviews have been!

aha!! sorry, it's just that percy goes missing a lot and he has a pretty wide circle of friends that are worried about him. :/

Aw, thank you!

You are very blunt. Thank you for your opinion, though. I'm going to go drink some... Tea, and pretend it's alchohol! :)

Thanks for that, Holy! actually, I often add and take out commas like, 5 times before I keep them there. I know what I'm doing with them, as much as ...

thank you for reviewing! I hope you're still willing to read the next installment, even if you don't want to review it. It gets a lot clearer there, too. hm. ...

well, thanks, then!

I think that what was in this particular poem was a bit of a revelation for me- like, a whole mind-blown sort of moment. I don't think that means my ...

pft, thanks. You know, I have a bunch of other stuff on this site, if you want ascertain if it's coincidence or not. glad you liked THIS, anyway, though I'm ...

well, I do think a lot of people can forgive sins if they're tolerant- which, of course, Jesus was (as is God, if that's who you believe in) just saying. ...

Yep, hope to see you too! thanks for explaining!

believe me, I feel the exact same way sometimes ;)

oh, also, cutting off your arm is not illegal. sorry! Everybody has the right to maim themselves as much as they like (before getting thrown into the looney bin...but that ...