Satira

Quite honestly, i find this to be a really unhealthy way to look at self-harm. This isn't something to romanticize. No, I'm not saying it's something to punish. but it ...

I do like this, there's a real poetry in some of these lines, but the big problem for me is that I don't understand your point. You say that the ...

Hey! in advance, I hope this review helps. I'm not going to take this thing sentence by sentence, but instead point out some general things I noticed. First of all, ...

First of all, I repeat Clevercogs- what you're ALL of them?? OK, I am ALL for LGBT+ pride and I think it's great that you're promoting it... But this poem ...

Hi, MissPheonix! Welcome to YWS! So, I do like the topic that you're discussing here, and I think you bring up some good points. You write politely but confidently. Good ...

Hello! Nice to meet you. I hope you'll find this review helpful! (here goes:) A lot of your writing is generalization. I know that some of the things you're talking ...

LET US replace the woman who committed adultery with a gay person who committed adultery. Adultery is a sin. sure. I can roll with that, I guess. so the gay ...

Um... I don't think that straight people need to be protected. When have they NOT been protected? when will they be scorned? I mean, they DO create life together, after ...

Hallo, friend. Welcome to YWS!!! I'm Satira (as you can see), and I'll be reviewing you today/night. Ahkay. Well, I'm not a real grammar stickler, but your grammar needs a ...

Hey! (here goes:) Celia confuses me. She doesn't like being 'dolled up', but she does like fancy dresses. She hates questions but she likes asking them(I understand what you meant ...

Hello! Satira here for a review! I like your concept, with the shooting stars... It's interesting. My biggest criticism is that your dialogue has this rhythm, or formula to it, ...

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Hello! Satira here for a review! I like your concept, with the shooting stars... It's interesting. My biggest criticism is that your dialogue has this rhythm, or formula to it, ...

Heyo! I think I've reviewed one of these installments before, and it's like I'm coming back to an old friend :) Yep, Chaser's right. You need to tighten up your ...

Hello! I need to do a bunch of reviews today because the Wizards aren't exactly cutting it right now, so I unfortunately don't have much time to read your 1st ...

Hi! (I haven't read the rest of this story, so I hope you'll excuse me if I criticize anything that you've explained in earlier, or possibly later, installments) Here goes: ...