Sassykat

I just have one thing to say: The "I" seems a little off. It's the only one that is a continuous sentance. It should follow the pattern of the rest ...

Yeeeeees! I liiiiike it! I am in a slightly morbid mood this evening so this works. Ooh, it gave me the shivers! I agree with Renn, you should make it ...

Whoo! You have a great poem here. I didn't understand some of it, but my general impression was that you are playing a violin or other stringed instrument. Excellent imagery. ...

Haha. I liked it. You should make it into a poem.

Aw! A proposal? How sweet! I enjoyed this one. Just one nitpick, though: It’s tough, now -a- days, to show or even let you know

I liked it a lot. I couldn't find anything to edit, since you've pointed out already the only flaw. Here are some title suggestions: Dream Ship Hopeful Dawn Dawn Night ...

Short, sweet, and to the point: I couldn't ask for more for a poem like this. You got the idea across fantastically. *clicks like* Great job!

I liked this. It was very sweet. I couldn't find anything to nitpick, so I'll just say well done!

gasp! Awesome description! Oh, wow....now I just have to ask what this has to do with May. Unless you wrote it in May...I honestly couldln't see any relation to May ...

Ooooh, graphic. Excellent description. I would say use capitalization. Lots of it. Call me a stickler, but I loooove capitalization. Bear, right?

Soccer, right? Oh, this was excellent. You definitely caught the mood of the moment very well, I could see and feel everything well. Great job. I can't think of anything ...

This was pretty. One like from me! I just noticed, critique-wise, that you had a tendency to throw in an extra syllable (or three) here and there, and it really ...

GASP! *faints* This was so cool. Please tell me you're going to do this with "Jar of Hearts." Fantastic job, totally loved it!

Ooooh. I loved it. It really got across the message well. Sweet job.

Short, sweet, and amazing. I liked it. One critique, and it's that the word "encase" means, I believe, to put something inside a case. What you are looking for here ...