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Try writing a bit of the post-sex scenes so that the piece makes sense to the reader too. Going in, we don't know what's happening at all. It would help ...

Oh no, sweetheart! Ah, I feel really bad now. Maybe I just didn't word some things right... I'm sorry.

I guess it is pretty funny. xD

Yeah, the last line gave me a bunch of problems. I still don't think it fits well. I tried to phrase so that it was obviously disconnected with the rest ...

Thanks for your comment. :) Like I said, this was just a sudden idea that came to me out of a sleep-deprived mind, and I didn't really continue with it ...

He's basically a mer.

Roosta... I can't even believe this right now. I can't even believe you right now. I just can't. This is fantastic.

Haha, I can tell. :)

Thanks, Love. Like I said in the post, this was actually something that I quickly put together because otherwise it would be blank space. I really appreciate this. It made ...

Guess I should put something here then...

I actually still don't know how to delete it so...

Actually I was planning on deleting it when I woke up because I haven't been here in a while and the site confused me a bit, especially because I was ...

Thank you both. I added a little edit to the end of the poem to clear up a few things.

This is lovely! Thank you.

I actually just wrote this off the top of my head. I'm thinking about developing it but am not quite sure. *phone rings*? I don't remember that being there. I'm ...