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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Bother and Bothered

    hhh I'm super sorry I copy and paste my review outline

    Nov 28, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: writers' block

    Yeah, the capitalization was on purpose. Thanks for the review!

    Nov 17, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Gabe's Garlic Bread

    pfft I love it

    Nov 13, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: ~Suckers 2~

    You're welcome!!

    Nov 6, 2017
  • Lyrics » Humor, Fanfiction Re: I Won't Be Back (Parody of You'll Be Back by Lin Manual-Miranda)

    Hey, I don't think I'll do a full review on this (I'm not good at reviewing songs :( ), but I just wanted to tell you that his name is ...

    Oct 26, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: writers' block

    heya, thanks for the review! no capitalization whatsoever in the piece was a stylistic choice. I meant to do that.

    Oct 24, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: writers' block

    Hi Kara! Thanks for the review! 1. You've asked me ten million times. You are not getting my soul. 2. I feel like the absence of the 'really' and the ...

    Oct 24, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: writers' block

    Hey E.E! I didn't really want to put punctuation in at all, but I see now that I did accidentally put it in some places. I've fixed it. Thanks!!

    Oct 24, 2017
  • Poetry » Film, Action / Adventure Re: May The Force Be With You

    You're welcome! One more thing, though, you wrote "show you're face!" Capitalize the first letter of 'show' and repunctuate you're (to 'your')

    Oct 24, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Just Listen, Please

    hey, can you start tagging me in your works?

    Oct 23, 2017
  • Other » Humor, Other Re: Inside Out and Outside In

    Welcome!

    Oct 23, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Health Re: dear you

    Hey, Arianna! I know you want to let Kara know that God loves everyone, but she doesn't want to hear it. Think about it as if someone (I'm going to ...

    Oct 11, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The world i live in-Ch. 1

    Hey! I'm planning on reviewing this, so please send me a PM or something when it's done, so I can check it out!

    Oct 8, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Buy Me A Pen

    Thanks for responding, and you're welcome! (:

    Oct 5, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Health Re: dear you

    You're welcome too :)

    Oct 2, 2017


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