Sarrasponda

Thank you! Wow thanks for pointing out the connection with Halloween - even I didn't see that hehe. I wrote this a while ago so whatever ties it has with ...

Why thank you! It's been a while, I wrote this last year so it probably won't get changed, but I appreciate your suggestion all the same!

Thank you! :)

Thanks for responding to my review, I'll be sure to check out any more chapters you post. It really does sound like an interesting story :)

I never feel like it - when I see something cool, it makes me want to write a story, not poetry :P how bout you, stories or poems?

Thanks I'm glad you liked it :)

Thanks i'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Thank you! You probably will never see another poem by me ever (I stopped writing poems years ago), but I'm glad you didn't find this one tedious to read :)

Thanks for the review! I honestly can't remember what it was about, I think I started writing about one dead lover talking to their living lover and trying to coax ...

Thanks for the helpful review/comments. Yeah I agree with most of what you're saying - those lines are really random, aren't they? But hey, I was like ten. I can't ...

Yeah thanks so much for clearing that up! I'm serious about it being a good idea. Still not sure exactly why they hated him oh well as you said All ...

I love it! I love stories about flight, and pursuing vision when everyone else thinks it's hopeless. This isn't a review, but I thought I'd point out your second last ...

Hey there! I think I'll leave this as a comment; this is really good! I love your emphasis on 'those eyes', which makes me wonder why your story is called ...

Hey there! Was reading your chapter and have decided to review it - which I will do, as soon as I return from my dinner. ;)

Hey I was thinking about reviewing this then changed my mind when I could find nothing wrong with it; it's just so good! :D I have said it before and ...