Sarah12

Hi! I really loved this poem. It really defines the pain of being alone, lonely. I like your dramatic style and your word choice. Th poem flows really well, and ...

Hi DrFeelGood. I loved this poem! It really shows the importance of everything, and the pain of being left out. You did a great job! I agree with mephistophelesangel. Sometimes ...

Hi! I am here to review. "And there they flow low in the sky."- Clouds don't really flow, I think you meant float. "There was a bit of sorrow,"- With ...

I love your vocabulary in this! And I totally agree with @Tay01. This is a beautifully written poem any way you look at it. I actually can't find anything that ...

Hey Alyssa! Its Sarah here to review. I have to say, you are descriptive. And you call me gory! Okay, first thing- commas. "I listen, and hear graspy, yet firm ...

"my eyes burn, my throat is like a giant ring of fire, i am sore all over and my muscles feel like jelly."- Capitalize 'my' and 'I', there should be ...

This story line is really good! '“How is she even here, is it really her?” I inhaled deeply through my nose, “how is she here?”'- After 'nose', you should have ...