Sapphire

Do you want to know the worst thing about beating through a broken heart? - Great first line It’s not the torment of bitter sunshine, stinging winds and rising tides-- ...

I really liked this poem. The title made me, personally, want to read it so nice choice! I'm not going to pick out images because they were all beautiful but ...

Eek, I got such a shock with that last line! Loved how the last line turned it all around. I didn't think the rhymes were too forced except perhaps 'I ...

In the s u mmer when I go to bed , The sun still streaming overhead , - I think this line would be nice in parenthesis! My bed becomes ...

Like BlondeTwiggy said, it was nice in chronological order and as Sportgurl46 said most people can definitely relate to this subject. Just a couple of picky things: Unknowing the emotion ...