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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Hugh

    POOKIE! How dare you post something without immediately notifying me?! A curse on your house, my friend! I'm wondering if this is part of your school thing you were writing ...

    Jun 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: In The Heart of The Head

    Yoooo buddy! You have a very poetic mind. That I can tell from reading this piece. Have you ever considered writing songs? Cause I think that's something you could do ...

    Jun 20, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The middle of Nowhere

    Hello there, Sandvich reporting in for daily review duty! This is certainly an interesting story. From my interpretation, it's a great description of this character moving in to a new ...

    Jun 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, General Re: Illusion

    Heya! I'm Sandvich, and I'm here to review. I've always been fascinated by history, and I've always found colonialism and exploration especially fascinating. So, naturally, your poem enticed and inter

    Jun 18, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Artist's Craft

    Hey! Sandvich here. I don't usually read poetry, so forgive the fact that this review will be completely lacking in technical stuff. I'll take this poem at face value, because ...

    Jun 17, 2013
  • Script » Fanfiction, Science Fiction Re: Doctor Who: The Daleks' Prize

    Hellooooooooo! I promised you a review. Apologies it's late, but this got posted pretty late last night and I was tired. :3 Well, I'll start by saying that this is ...

    Jun 16, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: The Fading - Chapter One

    Hey Roundsquare! I'm just going to open with this: I am glad that you asked me to read this. I sure as hell don't regret it. It's a superbly written ...

    Jun 15, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: It is yesterday

    Flash, aaaahhhh! Saviour of the universe! Hi, I'll be your reviewer today. Firstly, well, this is flash fiction if I ever saw it. It was over too quick. ^^ This ...

    Dec 4, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Empaths - Chapter 1

    *appears behind you* Good evening... I am Sandvich, but of course you already know that. After all... we do know each other... or do we? Who can tell, who can ...

    Oct 29, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: A Makeshift Calamity (Fear)

    Heya. Well done on second place in the Fear Contest. I'm here to give you your second review prize. :) Well, BadlyDrawnLightning has already reviewed, and he has very similar ...

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Hit the Black

    G'morning. I'm Sandvich and I'm here to give you your first review prize :3 Firstly, your title is a very good one. It's eye-catching, but it doesn't give a lot ...

    Sep 5, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Stop and Stare (Part 22)

    I've only ever detested two villains on a personal level. One, Obadiah Hakeswill from Sharpe. Two, Jax from this. My life will not be complete until I track him down ...

    Aug 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Freak

    Nice :3 I don't really review poems, so this review probably leaves a lot to be desired. Sorry in advance. :) One thing I noticed is that you used "I ...

    Aug 6, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Stop and Stare (Part 19)

    :D I love how Zoey's dad is coping with Aimee's death. A lot of the time where I read about somebody getting killed in a book and then it has ...

    Jul 27, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Stop and Stare (Part 18)

    Is it wrong that I can completely imaging Austin as one of my friends? Anyway, I've read all of this novel so far, so I'll give my general impressions in ...

    Jul 25, 2011


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