Samsal

oh my. this is such a nice piece. great job. it was a long poem but i didnt get bored at all. when you can write a long poem and ...

this is not bad. i like the idea behind it and it could use some work but it is great through. oh yeah and i agree with the others. it ...

the kiss was more lust than anything.

oh... this poem was very good. i hope you showed it to your neighbour. i could tell that you cared about that which you were speaking.nice :wink:

another thing... sex is never free, none of those things are. everything comes with a price, well most things do. just look at the tv once in a while or ...

so true. you spoke about a very heartfelt topic. i concur... i like this its very interesting. not much people write like you do keep it up.

this is a very cool poem. you talked about the sun and kept me interested at the same time. good job

this is nice. i like it, though i thought that it ended suddenly. i expected more for the ending.still it is a very cool poem. :)

funny of you to say that. i was going to make it a poem, but then this happened so i just went with it. might change it if i feel ...

thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

well thanks for the advice. i'll take it to heart. i did write it when i was much younger (and bored) but i like how honest you guys were. so ...