Sampson

I love your ideas already and I've really only skimmed. I didn't notice any grammar errors but my own is usually an atrocity so I'm not a good sorce for ...

Jus a few things I'd like to nitpic about this poem. Your grammar was acceptable but there are somethings that need to be changed. This isn't really in poem form, ...

Lets start out with what I liked about this poem, warning, this part could be a bit long. I was extatic by the fact that your words weren't typical nonsense ...

I genuinely enjoyed your story. I didn't expect to be as entertained as I was. Your narrations had voice, and your characters were well rounded. I was also delighted to ...

Where to start... well it was a very interesting and entertaining read, there were just a few things stopping it from being perfect. The biggest thing that bothered me was ...

The first thing that stands out are your sentences and how well they flow. One of the hardest things to find in a good story are sentences that sound good ...

I enjoyed the story and I don't want to ne too critical because this is the only piece I've read, but there are just a few things that need to ...

I pick a random story to review, hoping to be entertained and I was certainly not let down. Your wording was superb and the sentences, I feel, were well thought ...