Sam

If Incandescence liked it it MUST be good...*lol* I thought it was a great idea, the poem/story mix. :D No crit here!

cool...gotta keep that in mind, next time I get into a poetic state of mind (if that ever comes) thanks! :D

Ya, I guess you have to really strive to make it original, since a ton of people write this kind of poem. You could do that by like adding examples ...

*so hurtful* jk anyway, thanks, I'll go over them!

the real Jay wrote that in...thanks! :D

Ever notice how That one snowflake Or leaf Floating in space That you focus on Always seems to dance for you? Show off? Boast? It twirls and twists like and ...

welcome...It's really annoying when you feel like you have to compress your writing to make it shorter, huh? I hate that... :D

I swear I think I've read this before...have you ever been on Real Kids? Well, it's still great the second time through! I don't really have any crit for you...just ...

That's fine...anything ya got!

Magnetic poems are awesome! They're fun, and they make you think when you read them...*lol* these were cool! :D

cool...well, first of all, I have to write some more poems?

haha...that's my job!

You're welcome...:D It's really cool! Hey, don't mean to beg, but could you read my new untitiled story? I've had it up for a bit but nobody's read it...:D

I love the part about how she's a writer...you did that on purpose, didn't you? *lol* same stuff goes for the characters as last time, they're all really quirky. Like ...

It makes you think...maybe that's what he's getting at? *lol* work that brain, cars and guitars!