Sam

I wholeheartedly agree. :D Not much else to say here...

*yussss* I am not the only georgian/napoleonic freak, now, am I? lol I don't know anything about the Worchestire regiment, so I wouldn't be able to pick at all the ...

YAY!!!

*muahahahha* the first four were mine

ah yes....

Yusssssssss... Oh my gosh, J Wilder, this rocks so much...I seriously DO NOT know what to say...

=D> =D> =D> =D> Yusssss...YOU'VE POSTED IT! weehhe! Where is the really good part, about him in the bar or whatever?

Yay! Thanks guys. Just someone reading it is great. :D And it is supposed to read like a novel, tbr...

I really like this! My only thing would be...what time period are you thinking? i would get rid of the 'Ok's' because that phrase came into use only very the turn ...

LOL yeah...

YAY! this is still really, really good. Kinda freaky though, what with the marks suddenly appearing on their stomachs and whatnot lol.

You call the one guy 'the man with the midnight black hair' way too often. Try changing the phrase a little bit, OK? lol

The confusion is probably because this is an add-on to the story...lol I switched because the initial story is in '77, he is just remembering.

Hee. Glad to see you changed it from the comical 'Whack the Cat'...not as good as the previous ones, but you still did another chapter. YAY!

So far, it's pretty good from my point of view, but I have to read the original poem first before I go too in-depth. :wink: