Sam

Like the first Birds of War, it's still really good. I don't think my what you could call a critique will change.

Interesting... Although, Reichieru, the spelling errors really put me off. Spelling errors bother me. If it weren't for the mistakes, it'd be a great piece.

Yay! I feel like such a loser...I don't really have much to say...but, yesh... Honesty, Jack, I love the way you write.

Yay! I love the Sisterhood of the Traveling Pants!

Wow...only now have I realized how much I've actually written...

Hang on...I'll make you a list...

I think I've read something by him...have to check.

Liberty is his g-i-r-l-f-r-i-e-n-d how exactly could you miss that? tea meat on you! :D

People: Note, this is the FIRST FOUR PARAGRAPHS of a book. :wink:

Even like 1300's they at least had some sort of stays.

Well, peoples, me is off to Disney World... I'll be back in a week. Hopefully...between plane and pool time...there shall be a big update upon my return. :D

Nervei...I could live with that. :D

YES YES YES YES!!! hee, Willow...you just had to put that in there, didn't you? :wink: Not really much to say, sorry, just that I enjoyed it.

Wow. Truth be told, at the beginning I had doubts about this...but...excellent. Brilliant. That's all I have to say.

I'm trying to make it kind of like War and Peace, where there's a ton of different people's viewpoints all on the same thing mashed together. But I have to ...