Sam

This story was hilarious- however, would people be so dumb as to believe that alien sightings could be forecasted, like the weather? That's the only thing that really confused me. ...

Excellent! You didn't really have the sarcastic tone built up so it was sort of unexpected...but yeah. Do as you wish.

Welcome! Hmm...maybe something like 'Storm Chaser' or even just 'Soldier'? You'd want to keep the roughness of the title to make it work. *thinks* I'll tell you if I come ...

Hehe! I remember when I wrote that...happy, grammatically incorrect days...

Hehe, I do the exact same usually sounds better, like you said. :P

Clarify? (Sorry, can't think right now. :P)

YES! Thank you for a good read, Dusky, I must say. Angst-filled but still yummy...ending was a bit weak though. (Though I can't pinpoint exactly why- I would just look ...

Hey, thanks! Very good ideas...I knew the piece was lacking something but I didn't know what. Now I do! Hehe...I'll have some fun with it and see if it goes ...

Woah! Sublety! Either that or I've got an extremely short attention span. :wink:

Quote: 2a. The woman would have no idea about the money. Why wouldn't she? Woman's job- make babies. That's it. No other purpose in life.

Describe his hair. That'll shock people (since guys don't tend to do the hair thing...:P).

Hehe, aren't we all? Well, you're welcome! Tell me if you get stuck on anything else.

Hey, thanks! Have to admit...I haven't read it yet, so I'll go through and take out such.

NOOO! YOU MUST READ A LONG WAY FROM CHICAGO! Jeez, that's like my favorite book. :wink:

Heh! I'd never thought of that before...thanks! :D