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Hey, JBHABS! (If you split that up properly, it could be an excellent penname...J.B. Habs. Hah. :wink:) Grand story- your writing style flows really well and has a professional ring ...

Hey, mai4ever! Ah, what a cool story! Definitely original- and the twist was excellent. Very well written, as well. There were only two things that I have to rant about: ...

Hey, Girl_in_pink! I've got to disagree with Baroness, here- Nancy Drew could be kind of cool, if you play it up a bit. It'd take quiet a bit of work, ...

Hey, RatchetWriter! It's true- rats get quite a bit of bad press. That's why I liked this was very original, and I liked that the rats were talking about who ...

Hey, Nickelodeon! Jcobseed's right- write whatever you want, but make sure you're learning from it, as well. Take the time to work on plot and characters, and if you finish ...

Hey, JCobseed! Don’t look down. It’s a long fall. I’m not afraid of heights so much as the fall that each one ensures. Ah, an absolutely beautiful line. It's true, ...

Hey, Meevs! This is cool- writing prompts inspire great ideas, huh? This was very short, so I've only got two things to ramble about: SENTENCE VARIETY: I ramble on a ...

Augh, see, I don't like it very much...granted, I'm on page 250, but here's why. - Bella is totally a Mary Sue. Meyer describes a beautiful character- black hair, milk ...

Hey, Tinny! I thought this piece was really quite cool- it was futuristic without being overly metallic and harsh, and it was realistic, though elegant. Definitely a mixture that makes ...

Hey, Trackgal! Cool story- diaries are always very fun to read. It's like real snooping, only with a lot better stories. :wink: I did like how realistic the piece was, ...

Hey, Jessicarabbit! I really, really liked this story- you've got a very easy, flowing style, and of course...you have an awesome girl character in a world where most of them ...

Hey, Serena! It's really impressive that you hooked me in all the way through, considering it's a more teenlit piece- something I don't normally go for. I absolutely loved it...which ...

Hey, whence! I really like your style of writing- it's elegant, but very simple at the same time. Perhaps my favorite bit was at the begining, when they still deliver ...

Hey, Emooly! Yeah, I've got to agree, these are the best kind of characters. :wink: I liked the way you portrayed her...just wild enough without being overly random and obnoxious. ...

Hey there, Scrambles! (If I may call you that...) I thought this story was really cool- I liked Kaia and all of her art-induced moodiness. Such is the life of, ...