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Re: The Elephant's Legacy
Hey, Twitty! I love your style- it's very soft and neutral, but pretty in the way it's put together. Altogether, it's very easy to get through, which is nice to ...
Jul 8, 2007 -
Re: A Greenstick Fracture
Hey, CL! I'm sorry I didn't get to this earlier- I do love the title, and Fred an Davy are yummy as ever. The poem is a wondrous contrast to ...
Jul 6, 2007 -
Re: untitled[for now]
Hey, afamiliarsmile! Very sad story- but well written. I felt bad for Alexa. It'd be absolutely crazy if your boyfriend died in a plane crash, and you showed that well. ...
Jul 6, 2007 -
Re: .
Sorry, Brad- upped the rating, for the f-word. It is nearly an inch long, though. Kind of prominent. *clings to sentences* I haven't read Prosthesis, or Chionophobia- horrible of me, ...
Jul 6, 2007 -
Re: The Closet: Chapter Four
First off: HIKARU! KAORU! *squeals* Ahem. Thank you. Anyway...glad to see more Closet, Kite Ride! It's good as ever, and Forrest is getting suspisciously close, isn't he? Hmm...^_~ A few ...
Jul 6, 2007 -
Re: P.O.T.E. 2
Hey, FireArris! Ooh, cool idea for a story- eggs are interesting, because you don't really know what's going to come out of them until they hatch. ^_~ I also thought ...
Jul 6, 2007 -
Re: Artemis Fowl
I remember I used to love how Artemis was portrayed- he was kind of broken; very intelligent but not dashing or charming. I loved it. It was totally a break ...
Jun 30, 2007 -
Re: Sister of Mine
Hey, Chocoholic! Ooer, I really do not want to have a twin now...either being murdered or being driven mad- neither of the options is very appealing. Creepy story; did the ...
Jun 27, 2007 -
Re: Pre-Teen Diaries
Hey, Enigma! Ooh, I loved this...I could totally relate; I'm always the nerd who finishes my tests first and has to sit and do nothing for awhile. Diana wasn't very ...
Jun 27, 2007 -
Re: Shards: Prologue: Stix and Stones
Hey, Kit! *dies in the coolness* Yay, something new and avant garde! Eh, writers are supposed to be creative, but you really wouldn't know it *grumbles about certain authors who ...
Jun 25, 2007 -
Re: [deleted]
B-b-but...I love Mean Girls! *is being nerdy and reading the screenplay* Mean Girls is well written, actually. Maybe not with the actors that they chose (I haven't seen the movie), ...
Jun 17, 2007 -
Re: I just need to write
Hey, Justbeingme! Ooh, you've got an excellent frame for a story- an interesting, personal conflict, and characters that I could care about. What's missing? It needs to be fleshed out ...
Jun 15, 2007 -
Re: Lineage of the Orderen Chapter 1
Hey, Last Mohican! I really enjoyed reading this story- usually, I'm not that into fantasy, but this was engaging and kept me reading to the end. I quite liked Ojara, ...
Jun 14, 2007 -
Re: Sariah
Hey, SeraphTree! Ooh, cool piece- things taken from relgious books are always interesting, because there's a million different ways you could interpret some of these things. Especially the Book of ...
Jun 14, 2007 -
Re: Kaze Sore Kara Sensoo-- Prologue
Hey, Layleun! Ooh, cool story- I definitely like the peddler woman and her animals. Kind of a cool twist, huh? I also liked your voice, since it had elements of ...
Jun 13, 2007
