SalmanK

It is clever and that is what I liked about it. But it seemed a little immature! I would rate it three out of five and that is very good. ...

Just a quick comment its very good

can you please review my other works as well :)

actually i did not want it to become lengthy that is why i rushed and tried to finish it quickly. Please check out my other pieces they are a bit ...

Just what IHI said.

Just here for a quick comment! Nice work!

Is this a joke? Ok i need points so i will go ahead and review this as well. What you said is pretty spot on. Try to make it into ...

I Am currently Working on a story.This is just the starting of scene 2 of the story as i wrote in the description i just wanted to see if people ...

Its a bit silly . But you certainly have power in your words. You define your surroundings quite well . Good job keep on writing ! Can you comment or ...

i agree

Its good . The ever lasting war between reality and deception ! I liked it . Keep on writing ! Can u please comment on my work as well:

Its good . The rhyming is good ! The message you are trying to convey is fantastic ! Keep on the good work . Can u please comment on my ...

Can u please comment or review my work as well

" Woman is an incomplete man . " -Aristotle Although he is considered to be the greatest philosopher of all time , even his thoughts about woman were narrow minded ...

" Woman is an incomplete man . " -Aristotle Although he is considered to be the greatest philosopher of all time , even his thoughts about woman were narrow minded ...