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SalemReine

There’s beauty in the darkness… and then there’s me

  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: Good bye

    Thank you for your review, I will keep these in mind!

    Mon Dec 20, 2021 7:40 pm
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: Good bye

    It did touch me, thank you. I%u2019m glad that writing this helped people to understand a little bit of how I feel and what I%u2019m going through! Thank you for ...

    Mon Dec 20, 2021 7:39 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: The Marionettes- Page 47

    Thanks for your review, and thanks for bearing with me even though your pick is not getting chosen!

    Tue Dec 14, 2021 4:32 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: The Marionettes- Page 1

    Thank you for your review, I will take your suggestions into account!

    Sat Dec 04, 2021 3:39 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: The Marionettes- Page 1

    Thank you for your review!!

    Sat Dec 04, 2021 3:38 pm
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Conversations

    Fri Sep 03, 2021 7:56 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Flying Valkyries (Chapter 5)

    Thank you for your review!

    Fri Aug 13, 2021 3:15 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Flying Valkyries (Chapter 5)

    Thank you! I will definitely keep the reader%u2019s confusion in mind and figure out how to do author%u2019s notes or something like that!

    Fri Aug 13, 2021 3:15 pm
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Narrative Re: July 26

    Thank you so much! I understand what you mean about the dash, I think that probably makes more sense!

    Thu Jul 29, 2021 3:42 am
  • Short Story » Health, Narrative Re: Waking up.

    I think you misunderstood the story. They're not saying they just woke up with schizophrenia one day, they are illustrating their daily life living with the illness.

    Tue Jul 20, 2021 5:56 pm
  • Short Story » Health, Narrative Re: Waking up.

    Just because you were diagnosed with a disorder, that doesn't give you automatic rights to "call out" people who you think aren't suffering from the same thing. Mental illness is ...

    Tue Jul 20, 2021 4:37 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Stand By Me

    Good morning, afternoon, night, or aftermorrow! This is an awesome poem! It's short, but powerful. I really enjoyed the rhythm! I am extremely excited to read more!! Thank you and ...

    Sun Jul 18, 2021 2:50 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Dramatic Re: Paranormal Academy | 1.1

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    Hello! I am here to review this... obviously... so anyway let's do it! He had been spacing out a lot more recently, which he credited due to his medication change. ...

    Tue Jul 06, 2021 3:01 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Flying Valkyries (Chapter 1)

    Thank you! I appreciate your review and I will keep it in mind!

    Sat Jun 05, 2021 4:36 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Flying Valkyries (Chapter 1)

    Thank you for your review! They threw the boys overboard! (Just kidding, it%u2019s an all-girl gang) I will keep that in mind, about describing what%u2019s around them. Thanks again!

    Sat Jun 05, 2021 4:33 pm


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