SakuraFallsSweetly♥

What is love? Baby don't hurt me, don't hurt me, no more.

This is the first time I have followed a story on this in ages! It's so addictive! I can't wait for the next part, really! I hope you're writing it! ...

Hello. :) Is this poem also sort of a song? It reads like lyrics. It's quite powerful. :) I do however have a few comments about the last couple of ...

First off, I really did enjoy this. It had a nice flow to it and I liked the subtle rhyming which is seen mostly in the first stanza, but rears ...

Thank you :) this piece is completely different to the one that was reviewed by those previous reviewers so the one you have read is not the same. But thank ...

Thank you for your review, very much appreciated. :) Also, I am going to edit this and use your ideas, I think they make sense. Thank you so much for ...

That was a great poem! Well done! I've often written ones like this, and it's also something I feel strongly about. You're cool to have put the message out, I ...

Ohh things are really getting interesting now ;) This chapter was good, I just want to be able to flip a page open right now and read more. Seriously, more, ...

I loved this chapter! And I am so loving Harriet and Aiden. They are so cute, the chemistry is awesome! Just one request- MORE! The story is going so well, ...

Loved the Chapter! I will do a review on it tomorrow, haven't the time at the minute! Good work! =]

Awh I love it it's so romantic. =] The chorus is really sweet. Maybe you could extend the verses though, Unless you are one of those who have choppy short ...

That's beautiful. :) Nice to see writing like this, our world needs more writing like this. =] Very nice.

This was really good! The repetition really ephasised it. Great imagery, rhythm was pretty good too. Very nice piece you've written! Well done.

Awh! I thought this was really neat. Perfect for a one shot. Loved the rhetorical question at the end. The whole vibe of that in general, sweet. Very good. I'd ...