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Saichi

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Salvation (An edited version will be up soon)

    Hello cmueser! :3 Saichi here to give you a small review! I would just like to start by saying that this was a very adorable story. ^^ The main characters ...

    Jan 2, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Supernatural Re: Devilish--Chapter Two

    Hello! I'm just here to review your work here today! ^^ I will begin by saying that, apart from a few awkward sentences, I didn't have much of any complaints ...

    Dec 8, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: Dearest Abby- Chapter 3

    Alright, I would just like to start off by saying that I truly enjoyed reading this story. There weren't any obvious problems and I actually enjoyed how your characters were ...

    Oct 1, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: In Dream Sequence

    Hello! Saichi here to give a review! ^^ So, I really enjoy your writing style. You gave description AND you kept the story going. Some tend to use so much ...

    Oct 1, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: A Week For the World: Day 1 :Part 1

    All right, hello there! ^^ Just thought that I'd stop by and give my thoughts on this. Personally, I really enjoyed this, and I do mean that. I actually liked ...

    Sep 27, 2013
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Up to No Good

    Hello! ^^ Just stopped by to give a simple review! All right well, I should add that this is probably the first story I've ever read with an actual super ...

    Sep 26, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: Endless: VII

    To be honest, I really enjoyed this. I actually got involved with the story and I made it to the end of the story with ease. There was nothing that ...

    Sep 26, 2013
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: The Stories of Ben Robins ( A Harry Potter Fan Fiction )

    I must say and add that I normally do not read fan fiction. I've never really gotten into it, I suppose. But, I just felt like trying something new for ...

    Sep 26, 2013
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: A Journeys End

    I must say that this is a lovely story! It wasn't what I was expecting at all, which I find rather pleasing. I definitely think that this has several good ...

    Sep 25, 2013


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