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Thanks! And I figured as much when I wrote it, but posted it anyway for review from others. It's a prototype, and the symbolism is actually for my personal lore, ...

Hey there! Thanks for the review! I can honestly say that I put an EXTREME amount of effort into trying to maintain a solitary tense, but sometimes I slip, and...uh...(I ...

Please note that there were some formatting errors with the conversion of this from a Google Doc to this website, so some emphasis is missing, but I'm sure you guys ...

Thank you for the review! One of my personal downsides is my lack of understanding of the emotional spectrum and how a person would feel about a certain situation, and ...

Thank you for the review, and don't worry about harshness, I'm open to objective criticism about this; it's my first serious writing project. I'd need help understanding how the whole ...

Hey there! Thanks for the review, but I noticed you had some questions. This is Tuesday Afternoon, and there were two parts prior to this - Monday and Tuesday Morning. ...

Thank you! I didn't really know where I was going with it when I was writing and just sort of let my mind flow, even if my articulation was absolutely ...

Thanks, though I don't find myself much of a poet. I wanted to get into the genre of fantasy adventure, but I have to train myself more in imagery and ...

Thanks! It was just something small I came up with off of the top of my head while discussing MacBeth's insanity following his crimes. Sometimes I try, but other times ...

Thanks! Takes a load off of my mind.

Thanks for the review! Everything you said is true, and I was waiting for someone to say that, as I wrote this three years ago in a notebook of mine ...

The story I currently have posted WAS my English assignment. Got an A.

Oh. P.S., a good title would probably be Imperial Takedown or Hornet's Sting, depending on the flow of the story.

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Okay, NOPE! That...that got me right there. If it weren't for the fact that I've seen families like that before on television and in books, I'd have probably been hit ...

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Wow! At first I figured this was a romance story about some boy proving he's a person on the inside, but that twist caught me ALL the way off guard! ...