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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Realistic Re: The New Hero: Chapter One

    Heya, it's ya boi, back at it again with another review! (Okay, yeah, I know I haven't written a review on anything in literally beyond a year. I'm trying XD) ...

    Feb 18, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Firebond: Chapter 1 - Splinters in the weave

    "Who ya gonna call?" - Megaman. Don't even try to justify not understanding that joke. So! I'm loving the story - it has a good flow to it, the vocabulary ...

    Mar 30, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Teen Fiction Re: Prologue - Aspen Faye

    "I'm jumping out the window; I'm letting everything go; I'm letting everything go..." - Power, Kanye West So, uh...Not sure how to approach this one, but I know to do ...

    Mar 14, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Quest for Fire ~ Chapter 3 ~ The Howler Dragons

    "I've become so numb, I can't feel you there..." -"Numb", Linkin Park SO. I see you decided to go the route of PTSD. I personally enjoy reading about how everyone ...

    Feb 8, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Quest for Fire ~ Chapter 2 ~ The Legend is Real

    "I'm trying to play Game of War, but this one player keeps kicking my ass." "Is it TheLegend27?" "Yeah! TheLegend27!" - If you don't know, you're too far gone. SO. ...

    Feb 7, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Quest for Fire ~ Chapter 1 ~ The Island

    "Keep holding on when my brain's ticking like a bomb; Guess the black thoughts have come again to get me..." - Korn (Coming Undone) *When I'm playing a stealth section ...

    Feb 6, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Bleeding Butterflies.

    "Oh. Oh really? Oh, for real now? That's where we're going with this? Okay. Fine. I like a challenge." - me, every morning as I stare down my alarm clock, ...

    Oct 10, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: What's Changed?

    "I'm just going to call your chill Error 404- that junk is NOWHERE to be found." - Me, directly following me reading this poem, 2016 Yeesh! Okay, where do I ...

    Jul 22, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Reason Why I Dislike Quotes About World Change

    "You see, these types of things are the thingy-things I like to call "cliches" for lack of better terminology. That's how I knew she was on the ceiling."- Zhoma Sacred, ...

    Jun 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: I Left My Heart

    "Ten outta ten. Ten outta ten. Hundred outta hundred. Best game. Best game." - Jon "Jontron" Jafari, Takeshi's Challenge. This poem is basically a summarized version of what I literally ...

    Jun 12, 2016
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: Ukel

    This is going to suck. Literally."- Helena Masodis, A Trip to the Woods, 2015 This is actually one of the funniest things I've read in a while, transcripts from Jontron ...

    Jun 8, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: My Sister's Secrets

    "Got a secret(okay...), can you keep it(nope)? Swear this one you'll save(delete)?"- Unknown This was, to say the least, SOMETHING. It, uh, why exactly is it so hard to follow? ...

    May 29, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Paradise..?

    "It's our paradise, and it's our warzone" - some guy on the radio. idk. Hey there! I...um..well...I...would... *Ultra imagery skill jealousy intensifies exponentially* Huh? What? What do you mean I've

    May 29, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Action / Adventure Re: Journal Entry #002

    "POT SQUAD! UH-OH, HERE COMES THE REVIEW!" - me. boi. *OW!* SO! I have NO idea what the HECK is going on here but it's GOOD and I feel like ...

    May 29, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Monica: The Untold Story- Chapter 3

    "That escalated quickly."-Unknown(by myself, not others.) Thanks for the clarification and peace of mind knowing that Monica is actually trying to escape. I read through this twice to see if ...

    May 29, 2016


The capacity of human beings to bore one another seems to be vastly greater than that of any other animal.
— H. L. Mencken