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Re: Cloud Dreams
waa,you're so amazing!You just create a great poem I ever seen n_n! I really like the way you grab the theme there and the way you wrote it! "I think ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: Never Been Loved
Hi there,musiclover.Actually this is a kind of romantic poem plus with sad emotion,I guess n_n.This poem is simple and easy to understand.Your poem is great..But I wish you can put ...
Nov 19, 2011 -
Re: One
wow.This is a great job from you:D i like the theme that you grab thereit really working as a good poem! In the end, when we look back Did we ...
Nov 18, 2011 -
Re: A Private Feeling
wow.This is a great job from you:D i like the theme that you grab thereit really working as a good poem. ' 'It’s a dangerous world inside head, But head ...
Nov 18, 2011 -
Re: Gone for good.
I really like just like a story line but quit too simple.I wish you could put some pretty words at your poem.But,never still cute:D *'I was crying the whole out ...
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: The first One
Hi there,taliarose. What are you trying to say to the audiences from your poem?Sorry,because I dont understand about what you want to say through your poem.Maybe because I didt have ...
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: Too Young To Understand
I could feel the sad tone from your poem here.I could see that the writer is confuse about the things happen around him/her,but still the writer cannot do anything to ...
Nov 17, 2011 -
Re: Reminiscence
actually this poem can be shortened but still give the same the way,i like the way you grab this theme become a pretty poem for the audiens.Good job from you.keep ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: Oh What A Pretty Smile
i was smiled when i read this poem.Lol The theme you grab here is so cool,smile and love theme will always be a fresh theme to be grab.Good job from ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: If you hate me...
I'd like the look that you really 'hate' when hated by your own friend.Or you feel betreyed when your friend didt tell you that she/he doesnt like you.But I think ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: Writer's Block
i dont really agree about what wewinwelose had said about this poem.:s.there is no error to said 'uh make sense for the writer to write it on their poem.:)It just ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: Throwing Stones
Good work from you:)But friend,i still did't get the message that you try to show.Or maybe,i had a bad sense of feeling.Lol.Its seem that you try to say that,there is ...
Nov 14, 2011
