RyiaGreene

I actually really like the descriptions you used :) very nice. I'm currently revising this chapter after hearing the comments so I hope to re post this chapter once I've ...

Thank you for the review :) I guess I didn't really think too much on the description of the forest. I'm revising Chapter One and I hope I'm making the ...

Thank you for the review :) Yeah reading back on it there is a LOT more I could do with it. I may go back through and re-do or add ...

This made me laugh :) And made my day a lot better after reading this lol

Thank you :) I had actually wrote this at a pretty sad time in my life but I actually really liked it when I was done. I even asked my ...

Would you mind if I shared this on a group I'm in on Facebook?

Thank you :) and I didn't even notice the darn typo lol so thank you for pointing it out to me!!!!

Loved this story!!!! I hope to eventually write horror myself :D

Very good job on the poems!!!

I like these poems. Did you do all of these or did it say you and a few friends?

Hope to read more posts from you!!! This one was very good :)

Is this all you are wanting for the poem or are you still wanting to add on to it?

Hmmmm I never thought of that.... Very interesting idea. If I have any other poems that turn out like this one I'll be sure to keep that in mind. :) ...

Thank you :) Yeah it was an emotional time in my life when I wrote this lol. Thanks for your feedback I'm very glad to have it :)

I absolutely love this poem and the way you have written it!!! :D It's really good and reading it reminds me of my fiance lol. Very good job in my ...