Rydia

xD Yes. I was super in love with Wax at first but the more I get into the series the more Wayne grows on me and I just want to ...

No prob :)

The comments section does that sometimes - it doesn't like apostophes and some other kinds of punctuation.

I like it! I think something like this will make for a really strong introduction.

I like it! I think something like this will make for a really strong introduction.

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Hey there! So I love these kind of poetry collabs/ games because I think adapting to or mimicking the styles of others can teach us a lot. Specifics 1. I'd ...

You may find once you're a few chapters in that you don't need it any more/ can fit the key information in elsewhere. I had the same issue with my ...

I think you need some of the introduction but could certainly cut out a few of the less interesting parts - we don't need to know as much about her ...

Yes, that works! :)

No problem and yes, writing to a word limit is really difficult! Especially when it's so short so I'm really impressed with how much story and characterisation you managed to ...

Hm... I wanted Treego on the call to show Chip trusted him, but you're right, there probably isn't that much reason. Maybe Treego could acknowledge this and feel awkward? Or ...

No problem, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

If it's a consistent thing then that works! People will find it a little jarring at the beginning but then get used to it over time, much in the way ...

If it's a consistent thing then that works! People will find it a little jarring at the beginning but then get used to it over time, much in the way ...

Maybe you could try something like 'On the surface of his mask, his lips pursed in a fine line, seeming to draw the mask into his face.' And that makes ...