Rydia

Thanks everyone! xyberangel - I know and I think that's why I wrote about him. I mean, if the very embodiment of mystery decides to sit next to a writer, ...

Thank you Kim, I'm glad you liked it =) Read it aloud a bit, or ask other people to read it aloud. That's a really good idea, Colleen and something ...

Who's the author? I think I might take a look at the first. I'd hate to try and read them out of sequence.

I haven't. What's it about?

An archaic poem is basically a poem written in old English. And thanks for the review =)

In general, the new version is better but I have a few (more) suggestions - And chose to be merely content [This line doesn't make sense now and it should ...

No, like a full-stop.

And another draft. I think this one is much better and I have about another week before we're sending off so all critiques will be greatly appreciated - My Personal ...

This sounds like a really good read, I think I'll add it to my Christmas list.

I haven't read it yet but I do own a copy of it and I do intend to read it some time within the next year...

It's a brilliant Senryu, much better than any I've written and there have been a few. The imagery is pleasant, it's thought provoking and it's certainly humorous. I do agree ...

I like mythical creatures. Perhaps I'll read them some day.

Thank you Maki-Chan, that's vry encouraging. And thank you very much Colly, I'm very grateful that you took the time to look at this and I haven't done the re-write ...

Partly that and partly because it was unanswered itself and partly because you deserve a crit after the interest you've shown in my storybook and partly because I like to ...

Wow, that sounds rather twisted. I might take a look.