Rydia

XD Ah but where is the kitten eating? How can there be a SPEW trailer without kitten eating and CCF crushing? Other than that, epic win

Emotions teem and tangle, crossing wires with buried - treasure all unearthed in zealous pattern by - fingers scrambling in the depths of earthen tunnels where - shallow hands know ...

Thank you for the prompt and many replies my dears =) On the question of could it be extended, I think yes it could. I'll have a look at how ...

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Thanks guys! A couple of brief answers to questions and what not: 1. There is more of this as I've already confirmed to Mat by pm. It was indeed my ...

Okies, version two is now officially up. I'm much more pleased with this but it still needs to get better so comments would be great! And if you read version ...

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Thank you, dear. *snugs* You're always helpful and I think I'll print everyone's comments so that I can have them beside me when I find time to edit.

No, that was great, thanks Jon. And what you said about it moving from a solid world to a world of writing was one of the main bases for my ...

Thank you! I'm really grateful for the critique and you're right, some of the imagery really does need shaking up. Hmm. I'll give it a good brush of my editing ...

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! I've edited it a little more now, hope that's better...

Vox: thank you. I can see what you mean about it being a little jumpy but trust me, the lines I removed are staying gone. However, I'll see if I ...