Rydia

Thanks for the review, Hero! I'll certainly have a good think about your comments, though I don't agree that poetry should always have only one idea on each line. It's ...

Gah. Ignore the huge quoted section after 'Heather xxx'. It was there so I could make notes as I was reading through and I forgot to delete it, sorry!

It may or may not have been my fault that Stella lost her space ;)

Thanks for the help! Don't worry, any comments are useful to me at this stage and yep, you're pretty much spot on with your interpretation so at least I know ...

Thanks sockmonkey and you're right, it isn't a word. I was using my artistic licence to fit the rhyme scheme and general tone of the poem. Maybe I'll have to ...

Thanks for the review, Kit! I should probably have cleared this up before now but it's actually a 'Terza Rima' rather than a sonnet, though they share some similarities so ...

Hopefully you'll get a notification for this, I'm not entirely sure as I haven't tried replies to replies before. Fun, fun! Okay so by flat I chose a terrible word ...

Silly lack of edit button. Sorry, those lines weren't meant to be posted at the end. I always have the poem in the box with me to read as I ...

Thank you so much for an absolutely beautiful review! The long lines are supposed to be sang simultanneously, I just had trouble showing that ^^ And you're spot on with ...

Alright so I've become a tortoise which means I'm supposed to write a review today and this is the piece I chose at random to review! Except I'm going to ...

xD I can't wait to be able to edit this area again. It will be like Christmas but better. Also

MasterChef is a TV show we have over here! Although that could be Master Chef too, I'm not very sure. The names were the finalists on the show, but thanks ...

Thank you, I'll not say no to a compliment or two I suppose :)

There we go, I've put the newer version in :)

xD I suppose I should add in some sort of explanation and at some point I need to dig out the newer version since I made a few changes to ...